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Old 23-04-2024, 01:10 PM #1
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Default Star Trek: Voyager (One Last Ride) ''Picard-Style sequel series''



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15 years after returning home from the Delta Quadrant, the voyager crew are standing for their biggest challenge yet, a powerful CEO/Tycoon for the company Skytech has joined forces with the Romulan Tal Shiar to take over the derelict remains of Borg Space in the Delta Quadrant to use the borg technology to their advantage in the conflict against the federation

where Voyager-A has been retired, they launch their newest and upgraded asset the Voyager-B to stop SkyTech and the Romulans before its too late
Starring

Kate Mulgrew as Captain Kathryn Janeway

Robert Beltran as Commander Chakotay

Tim Russ as Captain Tuvok

Roxann Dawson as Chief Engineer B'Elanna Torres

Isabela Merced as Ensign Miral Paris

Garrett Wang as Ensign Harry Kim

Robert Duncan McNeill as Lieutenant Commander Tom Paris

Ernie Hudson as Hazard Team Sergeant/Chief of Security Les Foster

Channing Tatum as Hazard Team Commander Alexander Munro

Cameron Diaz as Hazard Team Sniper Telsia Murphy

Ming-Na Wen as Hazard Team Medic Juliet Jurot

Patrick Flueger as Hazard Team Weapons Specialist Kenn Lathrop

Gabriel Luna as Hazard Team Scout Perfecto Oviedo

Robert Picardo as The Doctor

with

Jonathan Frakes as Captain William Riker

Dean Norris as SkyTech CEO Donnie Lyndon

Steve Austin as Andrew Costa, Lyndon's right hand man

Nikolaj Coster-Waldau as Tal Shiar Commander Jal'Par

Denise Crosby as Admiral Sela

and

Avery Brooks as Commander Benjamin Sisko




tell me what do you think about my proposed ''picard style'' concept?
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think Coster-Waldau is a perfect casting for the Armada character Jal'Par



and tbh Norris from his breaking bad, under the dome popularity would be a fantastic villain in the star trek universe i feel



+ we gotta see more from B'Elanna, Tom and their daughter Miral storyline



Channing Tatum is a perfect casting for Alexander Munro (the elite force protagonist to work this one into live action as well) Ernie Hudson with his experience is a fine casting choice as Les Foster i think


the chemistry Cameron/Channing is perfect for the Munro/Murphy love storyline bit


Ming-Na can pull off the coolheadedness of Juliet Jurot character quite well i think
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Have you wrote any of the story by any chance, or is it just in a concept stage for now?
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its been 15 years since the USS Voyager had escaped through the borg transwarp conduit back to the alpha quadrant, a rogue tech company stumbled across the detailed cartography scans of the delta quadrant by voyager and also now aware of the borg base being as good as derelict thanks to future janeway her virus having infected the queen, this rogue company known as SkyTech team up with the romulan tal'shiar, the romulan secret police in order to build on a armada strong enough to wipe out the federation

it is up to Janeway and her crew to protect earth from this new threat at whatever cost
Donnie Lyndon: soon, these starfleet clowns are no more, people, soon we will regain control of our world again

Jal'Par: yes but what's in it for us?

Donnie Lyndon: a free world for everyone is what it is, a free world, you do know it was that Picard who stopped your freedom fighter Shinzon, right

Jal'Par: i understand

Donnie Lyndon: i'm glad you do (shakes hands with Jal'Par)

(Jal'Par beams back to his shrike class stealth ship)

Andrew Costa: what about the voyager crew?

Donnie Lyndon: what do you mean regarding those imbeciles, they are no longer a threat to us and if they are well we will have to take care of them, don't we

Andrew Costa: i'll keep an eye out for any form of trouble

(at a holodeck bar)

Kathryn Janeway: computer, coffee black (Riker walks into the bar)

William Riker: hello kathryn

Kathryn Janeway: hi will

William Riker: i really wish the circumstances were better and it was more of a social call but i've come to warn you

Kathryn Janeway: oh, what's wrong?

William Riker: our satellites have picked up on a romulan engine residue and we have reasons to think they travel cloaked

Kathryn Janeway: tal'shiar? well Jean-Luc had just gotten rid of Shinzon

William Riker: and they were in orbit for quite some time

Kathryn Janeway: really, seems suspicious i agree (news on the tv reporting about skytech's new nanoprobe project presentation with an interview with donnie lyndon) hold on, who is that?

William Riker: Donald ''Donnie'' Lyndon, billionaire entrepeneur CEO for SkyTech

Kathryn Janeway: Nano technology, i wonder where they got that from, you wouldn't think he's the one the romulans are here for

William Riker: i'll do my research on him, i'll let you know as soon as possible what i can find

(onboard Voyager-B)

Les Foster: alright Hazard Team, we're heading back into the delta quadrant but this time we take precautions, we're keeping one wormhole for a quick escape safe with two other federation akira-class ships, we need to investigate if something was taken from the borg base

Alexander Munro: who would want their hands on borg technology?

(Janeway and most senior staff beam onboard)

Kathryn Janeway: everyone at their stations, we're leaving now, Mr Paris i'll give you these specific coordinates

Tom Paris: Yes Ma'am

Chakotay: we're being hailed by a galaxy class ship, its Lyndon?

Kathryn Janeway: on screen

Donnie Lyndon: ah, the infamous Kathryn Janeway, you better stay away from that borg base, and so you know we outrank you captain, with firepower more superior than yours so better stand down

(the galaxy cruiser Dreadlock arming their weapons and turning towards voyager)

Kathryn Janeway: evasive maneuvers, now Tom

Tom Paris: new heading, 1.80.4

(onboard the Dreadlock)

Donnie Lyndon: (angrily smashes his padd on the floor) NOOOOOOOO!

Andrew Costa: sir?

Donnie Lyndon: out of my way, if Janeway wants to fight with us, she can have a war, arm quantum torpedoes, fire with these shield frequencies 2.45.67.84

Andrew Costa: firing torpedoes now (torpedoes cripple voyager-B's engines)

Donnie Lyndon: now get us out of here, maximum warp

(onboard voyager)

Kathryn Janeway: status report

Tuvok: hull breach on deck 7, 8 and our engines are offline

Tom Paris: i don't get it, we're dead in the water but he doesn't finish us off

Kathryn Janeway: of course not, he's going to the borg base obviously without wanting us to follow him

(shrike uncloaking in front of voyager)

Harry Kim: a romulan shrike just uncloaked in front of us and its hailing us

Kathryn Janeway: on screen

Jal'Par: i didn't want this, but i need to do what's best for our people

Kathryn Janeway: so you side with a freedom loving terrorist

Jal'Par: with all that borg technology, i bet he doesn't even need me in some weeks from now, you're right captain, but i'll stay close to them to gather intel

Kathryn Janeway: stay safe commander (to Les Foster) assemble a away team, you're travelling to borg space with the delta flyer

(in borg space)

Donnie Lyndon: here we are, scan all these ships and stations please, i don't want to come to any unnecessary surprises

Shada: scan complete, no lifeforms on any borg ship or station

Donnie Lyndon: Mining Season is Open

Andrew Costa: they'll never ******* learn, incoming shuttle

Donnie Lyndon: solve that problem yourself Costa, i'm beaming to the lead borg cube, so we can already take a transwarp coil and our first batch of nanoprobes

(the delta flyer fires its phasers at the dreadlock)

to be continued
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