[Harry!]

Magic's story's have inspired me to write some stories so here it is. This story is kinda autobiographical as it is based around me.

Life of a Tibb member:
Chapter 1 : A poster is born

8th September 2007 9:34 AM

There was a new thread opened, Nothing in particular just an ordinary average thread. peteburnscbb4mad who was never heard of before had posted this message 'hello Im new on tibb, can someone talk to me please.' Immediately two members posted their comments and went off. peteburnscbb4mad responded to their comments which were followed by four more comments saying nice thoughts. Retroman asked 'Hi, you ok' which was answered by saying 'Im ok thanks.' Retroman asked very interestedly 'Im glad we could get to know each other a little better there,' which was answered by posting a video of the band Dead Or Alive. During that day Chewy said hello as well which was replied with a load of smiles.

Day two arrived and peteburnscbb4mad (Now doacbb4mad) was getting to know everybody quite well. He had posted a little too may post's; over 145 a day, and was enjoying the life of being on a internet forum. Retroman who was getting to know him said 'Lol you said in another topic that you just like to talk a lot... But from the triple post, id say you are just post mad!? doacbb4mad replied with his new catch phrase 'postandpollmad by name - postandpollmad by nature!' and went looking at other things until Mrluvaluva posted 'Hello and welcome!' which he appreciated.

A month on and that thread was still being looked at as Holograms posted the last post on that thread.

[Harry!]

What do you think?

[Wildcat!]

Fail?

[Harry!]

Originally posted by Aint_mad_atcha
Fail?

How [If it is to do with ? then it has been edited now as they were meant to be ' ]

[Captain.Remy]

Message original : Madonna
This story is autobiographical as it is based around me.

Of course it is.

FAIL

[Harry!]

Originally posted by Captain.Remy

Of course it is.

FAIL

Did you know that you are possibly going to be a part in the next chapter?

[SiaSiaSia]

Uhm

[Callum]

ew.

[Annie]

[Ross]

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[Lauren]

Your story isn't so much a story. You're just listing events that happened and copying and pasting replies to things you'd said?

It's not creative writing, cos there's nothing new and creative about it.

[Magic]

Hmm, I kind of agree with what Lauren said. Maybe if you do more description, and maybe some more fictional plot-lines it may be more interesting.

Keep trying though

[Harry!]

Originally posted by Magic
Hmm, I kind of agree with what Lauren said. Maybe if you do more description, and maybe some more fictional plot-lines it may be more interesting.

Keep trying though

Thanks Magic. If I ever do another chaper I will take your advice