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View Poll Results: aden's rap - is this better or worse ?
WORSE theJoe 1 25.00%
WORSE theJoe
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its a bit better theJoe 1 25.00%
its a bit better theJoe
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crap theJoe 0 0%
crap theJoe
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have you had your medication theJoe ? call the nurse someone. 2 50.00%
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Old 10-10-2011, 02:41 PM #1
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DAY 30

day 30 got underway,
Fay was brushing her teeth,
the excuse of a man was hoovering,
she told him to go and show Gem you are no pussy or whats beneath.
a man of allot of words,
the whole sentence contained 2 syllables,
what i don't understand is,
why is it to Fay's sister he feels he has to give his Honorable's.
Jay aka Mr mussel,
was discussing the wolf pack and recruiting,
Louise is a floater,
Harry then made a stand and started "purple quarter" which deserves saluting.
Tom felt really happy about Gem,
he likes her more then her sister,
i am not sure if Arrons liking,
but if she No's anything,then it will be exposed by the gangster aka Anton mister.
Jay came and sat,
and Arron walked off, which maybe perceived as rude,
Jay said Gem reminds him of a old flame,
and what followed was just crude.
the wannabe gangster,
did complement Fay on her socks,
while Arron said Gem will bring out Fay's best,
this was like meeting the parents, on it rocks.
sister talk,
the kiss and disrespect task she did explain,
Gem raised the subject about "Arron",
while Fay felt like she suffered the effects of being on cocaine.
a shock about looks now,
Arron put on a face Pack,
Mr mussel was telling Tim dim but slim about there friendship,
but as Arron brings Alex Tea, she refused to crack.
a audition for a actress,
dim Tim slim had a walk like she is evil,
the sneak Tom was egging her on,
i don't think she pulled off the devil.
back to the grind,
Fay was not believing Arrons story about tickle and slap,
you have only slept with 4 people and no sex in 7 years,
then i heard, you are so fall of crap.
now a very intelligent game,
to dim Tim but slim, it was to not highlight the dense,
she searched for a hidden banana,
which Mr mussel chucked over the fence.
Mrs mussel and Arron were washing,
the plaque on there teeth has to have removal,
Arron asked if she minds him and her sister,
what i don't understand is, who is she to give approval.
Alex and the banana were still on,
she was still hunting,
well until her and Tom and Faye and Anton,
over the set-ti were jumping and grunting.
a privilege was enjoyed,
a button supplied music which they failed to understand,
because the 2 sisters had to correct a card house,
the trouble was a fan was activated as well as Gems fat hand.
the music was gold,
30 mins they played it non stop,
unaware the fan the sisters would cop.
Arron and the Prince,
with this kind of music did not gel,
while the sisters were crying,
because they done the card trick and won a "take away" from heaven it fell.
the 2 sisters were now hatching,
it clearly showed Fay's need to feel attention,
she told the group she is going to save her sister,
Arron showed his disgust, but as usual did not mention.
to clear his chest now,
Arron had to off load,
he told Fay about his chat with Gem,
denied being a player, so he's out of panic mode.
Mr mussel was speculating,
to make up with Arron was his call,
but after so many attempts,
he gathered he would get more response from a brick wall.
the x factor auditions next,
Jay was first up in front of the panel,
Louise and Alex were judges,
and Jay was very good in the bath, and he had no flannel.
danger is on the cards,
Louise is going to feature,
Gem is attracted to Jay because of his dominance,
his Ora confirms, Gem and him are the same creature.
its all about getting,
and Gem is going to enjoy the Jay coaxing,
i am open minded,
this could be a BB plan and Gem is hoaxing.
a caring side,
Gem dose not want Fay to get dropped,
because after this short romance,
she No's on to the next, Arron will have hopped.
2012 games came early,
a wrestling match was in planning,
but Gem has got a fit man's body,
her sex will for sure have genetic test scanning.
in MASS was Louise,
to our father she confessed,
there's something so lovely about him,
and Jay and her head are messed.
the gangster and the wannabe,
well they were in bed muddling,
they could not understand why they were loveless,
and said no, but i reckon they will end up cuddling.
a lye down chat was complex ed,
Louise and mr mussel used there vocabulary to seek,
he kept repeating himself,
while Louise up her game and used the word uneek.
the last of the night,
Gem was in the D-r and said her and Jay are like tobacco and rizla,
she added he's very attractive and likes flirting,
and thinks they both have the same charisma.
that's day 30,
its not as good as one of Adens raps from the ghetto,
but theJoe hopes i have gone down well,
as well as sensitive teeth and a freezing cornetto.




(THEJOE IS NOT EXSPECTING ANYONE TO REACH THE BOTTOM OF MY POEM AND IN MY POLL I AM EXSPECTING IT TO BE 100% WORSE THEN ADEN'S GANGSTER STREET RAPS. I UNFORTUNATLY DID NOT GROW UP IN THE GHETTOS WHERE ADEN GREW UP ALL THOUGH I LIVE 20 MINS AWAY FROM HIM BUT I AM SURE YOU WILL ALL AGREE WE ARE WORLDS APART LOL. PLEASE EVERYONE IF YOU BOTHER TO VOTE IN MY POLL PLEASE CONFIRM TO ME MY POEM IS EVEN MORE DEMENTING THEN ONE OF ADENS RAPS. AND PLEASE NO NURSE JOKES. I AM OUT ON LEAVE TODAY AND I HAVE HAD MY MEDICATION AT THE HOSPITAL BY THE NURSE THIS MORNING )
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Its okay madJOE. But writing it down and rapping are two different things you might be a better rapper than Aden who knows. But 10/10 for writing this all down knowing people probably won't even comment on it.

You also need to use paragraphs so its easier to read.
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